I’d say my blog writing definitely improves over the course of the term. As the term progresses, it is obvious that the concepts presented in the class become more clear to me as they are more easily integrated into the writing of the blog. The idea of sparseness in what the authors say and don’t say is a constant in my writing. It is one of the key ideas and appears in almost every blog entry. I think that personality comes through my writing style a little more as term progresses as well, which I believe strengthens my writing and not detracts from it. It feels more conversational than just a stiff informational essay, which is how my early entries feel to me. Now that I think of it, this is sounding as stiff as my early entries, but seeing as it is somewhat of an inventory, I fear it can’t be helped much.
Since blogs were not scheduled into small time frames, I fell that I had much more time to ponder and turn over in my head the ideas presented in class. This helps to make my blog much more well-rounded and insightful than my freewriting is. My blog entries are also a great deal longer than my freewrites, which allows for better explanation of my thoughts and more in-depth processes to be worked through without sounding confused or muddled by my haste to write.
What I see in the blog as a whole is that the members have moved from stating their own assumptions to struggling/trying to engage the ideas of the class to actually beginning to understand them. The ideas of genre seemed to be new to most everyone and deciding what to do with that unclear. Showing and telling was grasped at multiple times, as was the idea of interpretation. I see a lot of searching and trying to put uncertain thoughts into words. Some people’s blog entries remain fairly broad and general, never taking the plunge to narrow in on details. Others take more risks. Occasionally there is an attempt to engage responses to other people’s opinions into their own blogs, but this never really turns into a constant thing that carries any depth in it. I consider this to be a somewhat disappointing thing, as I think it could possibly have added more life to the blog (as well as more frequent posting). But there is only so much one can control, and I’ll admit I never really stuck my foot out there for that one much.
To sum up, I think that I see growth in most people’s blog entries, as well as my own. The concepts and ideas presented in class become more apparent and well integrated as the terms rolls on, which must mean we actually learned something new. Amazing.